Need correction

[Dura Albaher]

دور القضاء في محاسبة المخالفين للقانون وتعليمات النقابة بخصوص النوادي والقاعات التي تمارس فيها النشاطات الفنية بدون اجازة وموافقة النقابة
The role of the judiciary in holding those violate law and instruction of the syndicate in connection with clubs and halls where activities are practiced without a permission and an approval of the syndicate.

[Mohammed]

Hello Dura

It is good that you keep posting. I want just to tell you that almost all members are inactive in the forums and will unlikely respond to your question. Just thought of telling you to avoid frustration.

[Dura Albaher]

Hello *** Mohammed
I know that but I keep trying hoping
somebody will respond.

[Mohammed]

Yes, please do. Little hope is there, but why not. I have left Facebook (as a translation platform) and will stick to the forums for my own reflections.

[Arkan]

دور القضاء في محاسبة المخالفين للقانون وتعليمات النقابة بخصوص النوادي والقاعات التي تمارس فيها النشاطات الفنية بدون اجازة وموافقة النقابة The role of the judiciary in holding those violate law and instruction of the syndicate in connection with clubs and halls where activities are practiced without a permission and an approval of the syndicate.


since it is a legal translation, I believe that you should not have translated it in this was. you must have used 'shall'. However, what about the below translation:-

The judiciary shall .................

[Dura Albaher]

It is not a legal translation. It is a discussion about the role of the judiciary.

[Arkan]

However it is, we have to maintain of the sentence to look formal.

[Dura Albaher]

درة إليك الترجمة.
The role of the judiciary in holding accountable violators of the law and the syndicate’s instructions.
Such violations are related to clubs and halls in which activities are practised without the syndicate approval.
This is my attempt show me yours.

[Arkan]

The judiciary shall hold accountable people who violate law and instructions of the syndicate regarding clubs and halls where technical activities are practiced without any permission of the syndicate.